Evaluation

After the whole class watched our short mobile phone documentary they came up with some positives and negatives for our documentary to improve.
   Positives- Good mise en scene for interview (Phones for you webpage on computer)
                 - Good framing of the interviewee (a third of the way down)
                 - Good choice of music (Call on me)
                 - Clear interview

Negatives- The music should be in the back ground fading in and out
                - Camera work is shakey and need tripod
                - Illustrate cutaways to show what they are saying

After looking ourselves at the documentary it was not done atall to the best of our ability. When doing our next one we need to film the interview then make sure we have planned cutaways to illustrate that, if we havent then we need to film more cutaways. We also need to use a tripod with everything we film to make it look as professional as we can. When we edit our documentary we then also need to make sure the music fades in and out properly and makes it work. Also we need to edit the interview to the best of our ability to makesure the questions are not in atall. Along with that we need to makesure the interviewee answers the questions in full sentences and doesnt respond to the question with short answers.